Verbesserungsbedarf

Meine Kurzkritik zu The Demon: Hell is Earth no.1 (2017) macht mir klar wie rudimentär meine Kenntnisse der englischen Sprache sind.

A title that i longed to read because of the history in which it is steeped. Alas modern writing practices lessened the enjoyment with wich i hoped myself blessed. When traded the single issues become i might return to read the single tome.
I’m shit at rhyming, get the collected Kirby omnibus of The Demon, it is the comic equivalent of fine dining.